Editorial Edits

Chris Tep

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes,

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
no its a drawing

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
no

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
yes

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
no paragraphs

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
no
7. Is the writing clear?
no but the drawing was and it was funny


Brian Patten

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, very clear

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes,its kinda hidden

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Yes, most of the editorial is attacking the oppostion

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
yes

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
yes

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
yes
7. Is the writing clear?
Yes mostly but not all the time