Brian Patten
1. What are some areas that could use more detail? Why?
the part where he talks about Brett's vikings stats
2. What additional sources might the author use? Does the lead involve you in the story?
ESPN and vikings.com, Yes
3. Does the story contain a well defined scene (a detailed description of someone doing something or something happening)? What is it? If not, make a suggestion for a scene that might work.
yes when describing Brett's retirement press conference
4. What would you like to see or hear more of? Less of? Include, any other suggestions you have for improvement.
A vikings season review
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